Critical Eye II

More proof I have opinions.

still my fav ad campaign ever. Long-running because it works. Look how happy that duckling is. It’s perfect. Even though the first sentence is incorrectly title case and they used the "That's because" cliché.

still my fav ad campaign ever. Long-running because it works. Look how happy that duckling is. It’s perfect. Even though the first sentence is incorrectly title case and they used the "That's because" cliché.

Yes, yes, a thousand times yes. History has been made. Also smart move for a brand who needs to stay relevant. A+

Yes, yes, a thousand times yes. History has been made. Also smart move for a brand who needs to stay relevant. A+

Fixed your unnecessary commas with mascara, son

Fixed your unnecessary commas with mascara, son

I may not agree with pro-life billboards but I do agree that a headline of "WHAT!!!!!!" will grab your audience's attention and hold it.

I may not agree with pro-life billboards but I do agree that a headline of "WHAT!!!!!!" will grab your audience's attention and hold it.

I like this for some reason; not sure why.

I like this for some reason; not sure why.

Down for this copy, but they shoulda put a colon (because my name is not Sex)

Down for this copy, but they shoulda put a colon (because my name is not Sex)

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAH

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAH

Horrible syntax and grammar aside, this is advertising the wrong thing. Nobody is going to believe you that this breakfast is "delicious," because everyone knows it's simply not true. The selling point is the convenience factor--it comes from a conv…

Horrible syntax and grammar aside, this is advertising the wrong thing. Nobody is going to believe you that this breakfast is "delicious," because everyone knows it's simply not true. The selling point is the convenience factor--it comes from a convenience store.

Ladies and gentlemen: *THEEE SINGLE WORST* GRAMMATICAL ERROR I'VE EVER SEEN ON ANY AD, EVER. Was this on purpose to get social shares?

Ladies and gentlemen: *THEEE SINGLE WORST* GRAMMATICAL ERROR I'VE EVER SEEN ON ANY AD, EVER. Was this on purpose to get social shares?

^ Speaking of which, name your products well and youll not only increase sales but get free marketing from social shares…people like to be look clever by sharing your cleverness, as I have done here

^ Speaking of which, name your products well and youll not only increase sales but get free marketing from social shares…people like to be look clever by sharing your cleverness, as I have done here

Fantastic ad by Lyft, thanks guyz.

Fantastic ad by Lyft, thanks guyz.

?????????? 😳 😤 HOW DID THIS FUCKED UP SYNTAX HAVIN-ASS AD GET APPROVED??? WITH RANDOM COMMAS STUCK IN THERE???? THAT CHANGE THE ENTIRE MEANING AND FLOW OF THE SENTENCE??? I DONT FUCKING UNDERSTAND AND I AM SMH-ING *HARD* RIGHT NOW AT WHOEVER DID …


?????????? 😳 😤 HOW DID THIS FUCKED UP SYNTAX HAVIN-ASS AD GET APPROVED??? WITH RANDOM COMMAS STUCK IN THERE???? THAT CHANGE THE ENTIRE MEANING AND FLOW OF THE SENTENCE??? I DONT FUCKING UNDERSTAND AND I AM SMH-ING *HARD* RIGHT NOW AT WHOEVER DID THIS. #dontworrypeoplewillcallyou

Bought pet food from Chewy once. This brand decided to send HANDWRITTEN christmas cards to their customers. impression made...now i feel special and y'all got my brand loyalty.

Bought pet food from Chewy once. This brand decided to send HANDWRITTEN christmas cards to their customers. impression made...now i feel special and y'all got my brand loyalty.

......? Because you look pregnant, or like a senior citizen? Also, don't break the line after "get"...break it after "you."

......? Because you look pregnant, or like a senior citizen? Also, don't break the line after "get"...break it after "you."

i love it.

i love it.